You’ve tackled an exceptionally important subject and have included credible sou

You’ve tackled an exceptionally important subject and have included credible sources.
Most of the paper is accessible to the general reader.
There are many rough spots in the writing.
Narrowing the topic somewhat and including more specific research would strengthen your argument.
I have the comment that need to fix highlighted. Please refer to it and contact me if there’s any questions

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